Tuesday, September 17, 2013

The Spear of Destiny by M.E. Brines

The Spear Of Destiny by M.E. Brines


This is a short story of 32 pages and every single one of this is packed with a punch.  I was amazed at what the author managed to do with his characters and the story line in such a limited space.  

Character development, world building, this short had it all.  

I wish the author would have added another page from the moment where the final confrontation starts up though.  It would have made the last few pages a bit less hurried.  That said.  The pace in the story itself until that point was perfect.

I really loved this short. 

WaAr


Link towards Amazon for a free copy.  Also free on Smashwords et al.

http://www.amazon.com/gp/product/B005P1B1P2/ref=cm_cr_mts_prod_img

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