Tuesday, June 03, 2014

The Arrival, book one Birthright Trilogy by Nicole MacDonald

About the book

Cat, Kassie, Sian and Loi are anything but damsels in distress.

Fed up with a lack of decent male specimens they cast a love spell in the hopes of finding their soul-mates. And inadvertently land themselves on another planet. Oops.
The Arrival, follows the girls' adventures as they stumble through a foreign and often hostile world where humans are NOT at the top of the food chain.
Friendships are forged and love teeters on the horizon while the threat of civil war looms thanks to the girls' very unexpected 'gifts'.
Will the girls master these gifts in time to survive a war in which, not only are they the ultimate weapons, but also the ultimate prize?
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Count the pooches to see my star rating

My review

Right, let me start with why this book is not getting a higher star rating.

Firstly the book needs editing. Content, line etc. I think especially content editing since the lack of continuity is evident.

The change in POV is irritating. It really, really distracts from the story line.

Ok enough of me moaning. 

The story line is enchanting and holds so much promise. Even though I think this book needs work. I also think that if the author puts in the effort she might have a best seller on her hands here. 


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